Wednesday, June 19, 2013

one small moment by Jyneika

one small  moment



I feel the sun on my face.I hear  yelling and drilling hoses as well .


I get my turn.. I'm going  to shot .I stretch my arms it slips out of my hands nooo! I had missed the goal. I still had  go.Sadness flows in my body when i walk in side.

by Jyneka

Daffy Duck and the Dinosaur

Week 7 Reading Activity

Handwriting - This Weeks focus: Linking, Have a go at linking your writing.
Have you...
Note: when you mark your handwriting do it on a different sheet

  • Got your letters sitting on the line 1-5
  • Are all your lowercase letters taking up half of the space and your capitals all of the space 1-5
  • Have you slightly sloped your writing and is it leaning the right way 1-5
  • Are your letters too big, you should not find it difficult to fit all of the words on a line 1-5
  • are the spaces between your letters too big or too small 1-5
  • Does your title stand out 1-5
  • Does your border and picture (if room) relate to the writing 1-5
Tally up your total score 
Now get a buddy to score your handwriting - write the two scores down on your handwriting. What do you notice about the two scores?


Wednesday, June 12, 2013

One small moment by Laura

        Netball


Finally! its my turn to take the shot.I step up to the challenge.The suns in my eyes. I bend my knees, stretch my arms out and release the ball.Its so close to the hoop  I am sure its going to go in an no!!!  I missed.Sadness flows through my body as i slowly walk back inside.

written by Laura

one small moment by oceana

I was far away from the goal ready to kick
the ball  all i could hear was the drillers drilling hammers
hammering the nails and my heart-beat. I was running and i kicked
the ball my heat was going so fast i didn't know what was going to happen
its right by the goal.

Tuesday, June 11, 2013